Ilusiónome coa idea de levarte de paseo
De guiarte pola xeografía escarpada
Que crearon os ecos dos meus remos
Non aos pozos de suor e aceiro
Nin ao barranco dos cristais rotos
Tampouco ao vougo pedregal
Que tiven que cruzar descalzo
As coordenadas gps apuntarían
Ao territorio onde o amor foi arrolado
Aí quixera que me acompañaras
Aínda que algo como unha borrasca
Ameaza con nacerme no peito
De pensar que agora só quede alí:
Un monte de entullo e terra batida
Onde había unha fonda fonte fresca
Ou o desconcerto dunha chatarrería
En lugar do prado coas vacas pacendo
Gustaríame guiarte ata un outeiro
De onde sentir a cálidez dos teus ollos
Nas miñas costas mentres debando a madeixa do día
Quizais así poderiamos soñar
Outro manantial, outra herbeira vizosa
Onde os berces abalaran unha nova era
GPS coordinates
I'm excited about the idea
Of taking you for a ride
Of driving you through the rugged geography
Created by the echoes of my oars
I wouldn't show you the pits of sweat and steel
or the ravine of broken glass
or the desolate rocky terrain
where I had to cross barefoot.
The gps coordinates would point
To the territory where love was rocked
I would like you to accompany me
Although something like a storm
It threatens to be born in my chest
If I think that now it just stays there:
A pile of rubble and rammed earth
Where there was a deep cool spring
Or the bewilderment of a junkyard
Instead of the meadow with the cows grazing
I'd like to lead you to a hill
Where I can feel the warmth of your eyes
On my back as I weave the day
Maybe then we could dream
Of another spring, another lush meadow
Where cradles would rock a new age
What a beautiful and touching poem! It feels like an invitation to explore the memories and emotions of the lyrical self, guiding someone special through the internal landscapes created by their experiences. The metaphor of GPS coordinates adds a modern touch to this emotional journey, blending the precision of technology with the depth of human feelings.
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I love the analysis you have done! Thank you so much.
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