Leo o escrito onte
unha idea tan potente!
ao devalar a excitación da escrita
fican secando na luz do día
as imperfeccións do cristal
que semellara diamante
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Nada, outro día máis de deriva
navegando sen agulla de marear
nin trazas no horizonte
de terra na que puider prender
algún tipo de porto ou ría
devecendo por dar abrigo
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Revision
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I read what I wrote yesterday
such a powerful idea!
as the excitement of writing go out
the imperfections of the crystal
that had seemed diamond
are drying in the daylight
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Nothing, another day of drifting
sailing without a compass
nor any trace on the horizon
of land where it could take root
some kind of port or estuary
longing to give shelter
What a beautiful poem!
I liked it a lot❣️
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Thanks Luisa, I really appreciate your words! 🌺🌺
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The pleasure is all mine!🌹
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