o humano xa non
estaba máis só
aínda que
a dor
foi
anque a dor era
todavía alí
a medida
do seu
gris
do gris do seu berro
a agonía pon
nas entranas
peso de
chumbo
nó
nas vísceras o nó
o nó na gorxa
que aperta dobra
só bisagra
lamento
fel
do berro inservible
ao humano só
mudo amigo
do inerte
cristal
frío
human machine interface
the human was
no longer alone
even though
the pain
was
though the pain
was still there
to the extent
of his
gray
from the gray of his cry
the agony puts
in his bowels
lead weight
knot
in the entrails the knot
the knot in the throat
tightens bends
only hinge lament
bile
of the useless scream
for the human just
silent friend of inert
and cold
screen
There seems to be a lot of sadness in this poem. Am I right?
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These last days I write more sad poems than usual, it’s a period I’m living, I need to accept this sadness, till it will be healed.
Thank you for asking
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I hope you will feel happier soon. Take care, Abel.
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Thank you, Olivia, you are very kind
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Yoy are most welcome, Abel.. I think kindness is a simple human necessity nowadays. What do you think?
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For me, kindness is the healing ointment of humanity. Sometimes, just a smile in a bad day make things change
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True, a smile or a kind word make a big change.
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